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Whisper

by Elizabeth


Evanescence's Song (My absolute favorite song. It iis so great that I'm typing it myself)

Catch me as I fall
say you're here and it's all over now
Speaking to the atmosphere
No one's here and I fall into myself
This truth, drive me
Into madness
I know I can stop the pain if I will it all away
If I will it all away

Don't turn away, (Don't give into the light)
Don't try too hide (though they're calling your name)
Don't close your eyes (God knows what lies ahead)
Don't turn out the lights.

I'm frightened by what I see
But somehow I know that there's much more to come
Immobilized, by my fears
Seems to be
blinded my tears
I can't stop the pain if I will it all away
If i will it all away

Don't turn away, (Don't give into the light)
Don't try too hide (though they're calling your name)
Don't close your eyes (God knows what lies ahead)
Don't turn out the lights.

Fallen angels at my feet
Whispering voices in my ears
Death before my eyes
Lying next to me I fear
She bekons me shall I give in
Upon my end shall I begin
Forsaking all i've fallen for I rise to meet the end...

Don't turn away, (Don't give into the light)
Don't try too hide (though they're calling your name)
Don't close your eyes (God knows what lies ahead)
Don't turn out the lights.

Don't turn away, (Don't give into the light)
Don't try too hide (though they're calling your name)
Don't close your eyes (God knows what lies ahead)
Don't turn out the lights.


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Tue Apr 29, 2008 9:06 pm
Meshugenah wrote a review...



Lyrics is for posting lyrics you write, not those of others. If you want to share this, it should be in the Lounge or Randomness or Entertainment.

*locked*

As a side note, make sure you check the post date of the original post in a thread before replying to one that's two years old.




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Tue Apr 29, 2008 6:05 pm
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I love Evanescence! Everybody's Fool, Sweet Sacrifice, Like You, Imaginary, and the best song of all time, Bring Me to Life! :D I'm listening to them right now.




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Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:23 am
Summerless says...



I agree with CK Lynn. The lyrics are kind of haunting.

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This is Evanescence's song?
I'll go listen to it right now. :]




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Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:21 pm
CK Lynn says...



Haunting.

Kind of bittersweet, like a happy memory. The only thing wrong I found was that sometimes you don't capitalize your I's.




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Mon Mar 07, 2005 9:49 pm
Chevy says...



You had me for a second. I thought you wrote this...I think this is supposed to be for songs you wrote?
Anyway, it was cliche to me.




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Wed Mar 02, 2005 2:08 am
Elizabeth says...



it says for Lyrics and songs and Lyrical poetry is for our lyrics... fehhh


Yeah I heard it... I like Whisper and Haunted and Missing and my immortal.... everything!




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Wed Mar 02, 2005 1:43 am
niteowl says...



I love this song too! But did you really have to bother posting someone else's song?

You know which other song I love? "Everybody's Fool."





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