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It does??? O-o I didn't notice. But then again I wrote it so....yeah. ^^'
But tank u fur yur dedication, lack of comments make me feel lonely.
And yeah I've been trying so hard in my stories to write awesome cliffhangers, I just love them so much.
Rite on.
I've been enjoying your book so far. It's pretty good. I'll definately continue reading. The one thing I've really noticed is that you've switched a few times between past and present tense. In some places it's not that bad, but in others it jumps out and bugs me. Don't stop writing this, I want to know what happens. Hurry and get the next part out. Your cliff hanger works all too well.