Who was making and baking
His bac-on
in the Serra-a-tions
of the band hall station
waitin’ for all the na-tions to see
stand up and shout
”what in tarnation”
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oh my, this is... this is absolutely wonderful.
I shall be reviewing this masterpiece to the best of my ability, I hope it does this poem good.
This poem brought a tear to my eye; the verses are breathtaking and beautiful.
"stand up and shout
'What in tarnation'"
This is my favorite verse in the poem; it truly brings to light the true emotions oof the author. All I could think was 'wow'
This is a truly beautiful piece.
Anyway, you are an amazing poet, keep up the great work! Mwah Mwah!
-STARRY
This is a masterpiece. Absolutely beautiful.
A myriad of tears fell from my eyes as I read this literary masterpiece. There was so many beautiful words combined together to make such an amazing piece of work.
The world should read this gorgeous piece of poetry. World peace could finally be achieved.
The future generations will read this and have a tear run down their faces as they see the beauty and the grace.
Amazing, tear inducing, beautiful, better than Crater tried to be, grateful, gorgeous poetry.
I need a film adaptation featuring Jack Black.
I second this