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This short story is very intriguing to me, as it starts off very mysterious, which is really captivating. The writing in this story really adds to the eerie mood of it. The main plot is that the protagonist is afraid of their friend Chara leaving them, and by the end of the story their fear comes true. I really enjoyed the ending of this story, it makes you curious as to what would happen next, which is something I enjoyed. I think the only thing I would change is that I would add more description in between the dialogue to show how the characters are feeling. But overall, I really enjoyed this story!
Points: 365
Reviews: 6
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