Escape with me?
Lets get out of here,
Leave all we know,
Lets go find ourselves,
Come on,
You know you wanna.
Let's leave this boring old town,
And go somewhere exciting.
I wanna go somewhere
Somewhere where I can be me
without worry
Let's pack our bags,
Escape.
Live our lives our way
Come on.
You know you wanna
Don't worry
We'll be free
No more parents to make rules
No more teachers to give us homework
Let's go
We could be famous
You:
A rock star
and me,
What could I do?
I know what you would say.
So
Come on,
Let's escape from this
Leave all we know
Be reborn anew
Not the people our parents want us to be
So,
What do you say?
Escape with me?
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