Watch my soul, its quick decent
Feel my sorrow, hear my rant
My shattered heart's been torn away
And in his hands it just might stay
My love for him will never end
My aching chest may never mend
Gained my trust and earned my love
Then something ruined what it was
We do not talk, we cannot be
He never even looks at me
I know it isn't all his fault
But our happy days have come to halt
Our friendship, my hope, is all down the drain
But he feels just fine, he has her; feels no pain
I dream of the days when our eyes first met
Before the awkward silences and moments we regret
Before all the trouble when our lives were free
I dream of those days and I hope, so does he
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its very good nicole i actually knew u were good but i didnt know u were this good