Hey Klabloozleman! Strange here and I have a review for you!
I can't believe this is still in the Green Room. I also understand you are no longer active, but I felt the need to review this.
I found this hilarious. This felt more of a satire, complaining about those people with those huge egos. How one loathes them. This describes life near perfectly. We all don't like those people. We feel the need that they don't need to shove their pride into our faces. This observes how everyone feels. This describes high school life, college life, near everything. I love that part of the poem.
The last line is near perfect. I felt the need to clap for christ sakes. It was hilarious. You break into their car, or key it even. That made me laugh hard. As a humor poet, I can't write a poem like this that is so funny.
Overall, great job.
Strange gives you...
9.1/10
Great job
Keep writing
Stay groovy, my friend.
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