Hey! its Kz! I am super into songs, I just joined YWS and so far, I reviewed mostly songs. Lolz. I am a singer/ songwriter so this is huge for me to get to review other peoples work besides my bff's. anyway... right to it...
"Always , I know soon I'll self destruct: What is this pain, (An inner melt)"
I think that this is PERFECT. this sounds ahmazing in my head.
"Smiling though pain and tears: The prize you've been given is not free: The price is your freedom"
(ahmazing alliteration, btw!)
This is really gud. I can't get over that. so... I want to mention that I think that If you haven't already checked out "soundofmind" @soundofmind, (fellow artist) then I recommend doing so!!!
Another REALLY quick thing...
Your lyric and ability to make the writing seem so... I don't know... not melo-dramatic, even with the content is INCREDIBLE!!!
Stay Cool and Keep Writing...
-Kz!
🥳 sayonara!!!
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