Young Writers Society

Thank you for posting another great poem for me to review! This is ZeldaIsShiek, and I am going to review your poem and make it clear for all to hear! I'll also be the savior of the Witches in the final hours of Review Day and stop the Werewolves from winning! That being said, we should get started on the reviewing!

This poem really stood out to me as something different the second I saw... the language warning... You never ever put any kind of profanity or many sensitive topics in your work, and seeing this meant that you really meant this one, and that you were writing from inside your heart. This is something that I fully condone, and I think you get a lot more out of you writing when the meanings come from within, not from an outside inspiration.

I noticed that the person this poem is focused on was dealing with some issues I used to deal with, and that made me feel more comfortable around this poem. I used to have a lot of problems with a certain person not understanding me and not fully listening to me, and I can relate to trusting few and loving few. The only thing that is so perfectly fitting is the message, which actually creates the feeling that the person writing the poem secretly hates who they are talking to for their actions.

-ZeldaIsShiek

Hello Flumadiddle! Welcome to YWS! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!

Give me your soul.

With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!

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Italics = suggestions and overall
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Underline = krazy Kara komments.

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Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review!
I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about this.

Over and over the sound echo's through my brain.

Knowing that you will just ignore me, what I truly need to say.

Really now, this is why I trust so few and only truly love a single few.

@woahhitherepal @alliyah