"I am from totally failing to do cartwheels
And totally completing puzzles"
*unless this was intentional, I would come up with a synonym for the second "totally"
I could only find that one thing. I think this is a really sweet poem and I love how you capture your whole life in those few individual sentences. They are unique. You give readers short sentences, yet they completely describe your life and past and I can picture everything. Great job!
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