This is my first review so I apologize if it isn't my best.
First of all, I give you credit for going against a normality in poetry and having the second stanza be shorter than the rest. I have to give you props for that, especially because you made it work.
Second, I love the vivid word choice. I could clearly see what you were going for and it made it that much more enjoyable. The second verse was my favorite, as it gave a strong, clear image of wind and warriors.
Overall, really good job on the poem. I'm excited to see what else you come up with.
Points: 240
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