This is a very well written poem. Good job on the topic selection. I was able to gather a lot of imagery from your poem. Just be careful with punctuation spelling and grammar. Other than that a very well written piece. can't wait to see what in store for us next time. Keep up the good work. You are doing well. Poems are very hard to write and perfect but you have done a good job though.
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