In all honesty, this caught my attention. Not very much at first, but as I read the rest of it (several times might I add) It really did catch my attention. This is something I would love to read some day!
I'm not going to say anything about the trees, as the other three already have, but I will say that you portrayed an amazing vivid image. A tragic, beautiful image.
"Are you ready for the apocalypse?" This right here is what really caught my attention, because as a reader, this single line is telling me that we are going to be in the book, as if we are right along side the main character(s), which is my absolute most favorite part about reading.
I'm not sure if this was intended or not, but Wastelands, nukes, it's a little like Fallout? I'm not sure if you've played the games or not, where as I've only played one of them, but part of Fallout (A game based on post-apocalyptic living after a nuclear holocaust) is centered around the open area, called the Wastelands. Just something I noticed, it could possibly cause issues in the future with copyright stuff? I'm not too sure, I haven't read into it, just a heads up.
All in all, I loved it, it's a great introduction, and you did an amazing job! Message me if you upload anything? I'd kill to read some of it.
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