Hi, GreenTulip here to give you a review. It's Review Day but I am also here to give you a review for Poetry Exchange.
I know that many people are pushing for us all to use the "Review Sandwich" but I don't roll that way because I am already somewhere, where I am forced to comply by a certain writing style. I can't do it in a review- which I know I can let my feedback come out in a way that I know will be true. So this is just me and my random style.
So I couldn't even read the poem. Nothing caught my attention, besides the title. That doesn't mean it's not good. I think that you just have a different style- one that I am not comfortable with reading. With a college level English class while being in high school has made me more unwilling to read, but that has nothing to do with this, not that I think about it. It's just out of the norm for me to read. Don't take it as your poem is bad.
I see that I one thing that I am confused on...and I can point it out here.
...What does the tree mean?
Oh, the tree is merely a tree.
What is with the ... in front of the stanza. It's formatting is weird.
~Keep writing. Hope you found help in this. ~ Tulip.
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