1. Your chapters are much to short. They hold to many things in them, and it flows to fast in such a small space. Try to lengthen out your chapters.
2. Another flashback is okay...but not chapter after chapter. Space them out.
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She remembered that day too well. They had been almost through the forest and were relaxed, letting their guard down. Kari skipped on ahead and chattered to Josef as they walked. Kaleb hung back silent as ever. Aria turned back just in time to see him fall to the ground, his blood filling the air. The catmorph stood six feet tall. It's tawny brown hair fell in a sheet down it's back and it's brown eyes looked bored, but feral. It slowly raised its hand to its mouth and blew on its fingernails. It wasn't the sight of Kaleb's blood dripping from those perfectly shaped, razor sharp nails or fear for her own life that made her through the knife through its heart. Instead it was her own rage at its casual reaction to murder that made her react. Josef drew the sword that he had salvaged from the ruins and Aria drew her second knife. While sprinting to retrieve the first she remembered what Nathan had told her about catmorphs. They lived in family groups of five to fifteen in the forests. Stealth was their main asset. They had a cat's agility and balance and could jump slightly higher or further than normal. They had exceptional night vision and better daytime sight than humans or even elves. If you were attacked then your best chance was to win as fast as possible. Their natural instinct was to toy with their victims, but once that was over their increased speed meant the odds were against you.
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