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Guess who's gonna a the review for you?
Yeah, it's me.
The one and only haha
Okay so HEY SLUSHY *screams with a high pitch voice*
Umaima here to give you a wonderful review which even if you don't like you won't be able to avoid! (I know this is 18 plus so assume me as a 19 year old for today )
So starting with the review,
Okay so due to the lack of time I am going to divide my review into three sections:
Positives, Negatives and then the overall view of the poem.
Positives:
Let's begin with the title, frankly speaking I thought that there couldn't be any better title than the one you have given to your piece! The title showed the correct understanding of the poem. Though when I read it I didn't think it was literally about a mirror (You can expect anything from a poem)
Your punctuation, grammar and formatting was absolutely perfect and even if there were a few mistakes (which I couldn't really pin pint) they weren't that big of a deal!
Negatives:
The plot, now the plot wasn't something very different from what we read usually (I have this one poem about the mirror in my literature reader too though it's a little different than this and I can guarantee this poem is much better than that, they still have a similarity!) (I am not really a good critique and this is the only thing I thought was a negative for your piece)
Conclusion:
This was overall a very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it and now I will become your portfolio stalker after my exams and read the other poems too (If any) And guess what? You can't get rid of me
Oh and I have to mention this, my favorite lines were:
:The mirror is shattered, she is completely broken,
she can no longer look back at me.
And I smile, basking in my triumph,
knuckles running a trail of crimson behind me, only to find,
She has somehow managed to hide in my mind.
Repeating, echoing, and twisting the same
thing over and over again.:
Yeah I could have just said, I loved the last para the most but where's the fun in that? (Plus it's review day )
Happy review day!
Once again, Umaima!
Points: 3690
Reviews: 122
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