I'm going to try and post a series of my flash fiction because I'm trying to work on this kind of short story writing. Phew! It is tough to try and say a lot with few words. This one's just 143 words. :D Enjoy!
The rays of the sun have come out to play. Winter is quietly shying away from everyone’s lips, and colour is now eminent, from the budding plants, to people’s pants. The sky is bright and blue again. Oh how I wish I could be up there, beyond the sky. As I sit on the side walk, helpless and confused, I try not to think about it. For how will I explain the tear, softly caressing my cheek? I’ve tried not to let it roam free, but my feelings have been hurt, it’s only right- it’s my right to cry. Two girls approach me; waddling skirts, talkin’ dirt, free from hurt. They wouldn’t understand. For they didn’t see his eyes, denying ever loving me; denying me security. Those eyes; murky brown, no longer deep and soft- kicking me out! That son of a bitch!
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