ur piece of work is trendy! it's of neolithic age! in ur writing , u hv defined a new age of writing! it is very interesting. ur writing is unique and cool! most importantly ur rhyming scheme is good! somewhere u used ababa...pattern which give ur work a sort of height! where nobody can reach easily! ur poem sounds strongly connected with words! u hv a master degree in poetry or wat? i think u hv........ jokes apart overall ur work is nice! keep it up! mate!
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