I read this out loud in the voice and the way I thought it should be read, which just made the poem even more amazing. The spaces and lines that you used to separate sentences from each other and especially making certain words bigger then the other words made it a whole lot better. I don't have much to say because the reviewers below me have already said it and what good does it do to repeat them? I do wish that it ended a little bit better, just because the poem itself seemed as though it went to the climax in your story and then it just ended, not really much of a trail downward, if that makes sense. But other then that, I really enjoyed reading this humorous poem of irony
Points: 4117
Reviews: 87
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