Would you mind reviewing a contest entry for me? It's really quite shabby, so I could do with some help to improve it before the contest's deadline arrives. It's a general fiction short story.
Hi there, Please review the first chapter of my novel Angel : post889219.html#p889219 It's crappy, and really needs help. Thank you!!
We'reallalittle weird. Andlife's a littleweird. Andwhen wefindsomeonewhoseweirdnessis compatiblewithours, we joinupwith them and fallin mutual weirdnessand callit love.
I don't know if I've ever gotten a review from you before, but I've seen yours around. If you have time, could you please review topic85238.html ? It's a general fiction flash piece, somewhat styllized, and it needs help.
Thank you!
Rach
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