I've never heard Fat Domino's song, but I thought this was really well done. There's a nice beat to it all throughout, and it flows well. All in all, this was a cool poem to read.
I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway. — Vogon Captain (The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy)
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