I've never heard Fat Domino's song, but I thought this was really well done. There's a nice beat to it all throughout, and it flows well. All in all, this was a cool poem to read.
The wince that you wince when you see your quote in the quote generator is quite a wince, I tell ya. To know that the whole YWS community has read and judged your quote is quite an awkward feeling like oh noes.
*manly blush* — Arcticus
