Oh the antagonist isn't the new dragon. The love triangle would be a nice twist though.
I'm going to make a new antagonist, change the plot, and allow new characters!:)
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
Not much of a plot, but it made it more interesting, in my opinion.
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
I'm kind of hesitant about the animal army thing... in reality, most animals wouldn't obey a shifter immediately. Plus people like Hunter and Laiel are sunk, unless this takes place in Africa. I mean, the spider thing is okay, but as for the others, I think it would depend on the animal...
"We need not to be let alone. We need to be really bothered once in a while. How long is it since you were really bothered? About something important, about something real?"
Hey Ranger, I was thinking about the love triangle and think Laiel and Rayah would be a good couple, she left the evil team for a few days and I think it would be really cute if a person from the evil team fell in love with a person from good. But It's your choice.
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!
Laiel is in love with Adrian from the evil team at the moment. It could be aother love triangle I guess.
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
Go back a couple pages, and see where you last posted. Then read from there.
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
Cora's creator: Don't break Diablo's heart. He wants someone to love him and get passed his jewel-hoarding habit. Cora can't really hold it against Diablo that he's a jewel-hoarder. He likes jewels, but he loves Cora. Can't she see that?
Look down and show some mercy if you can. Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.
An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming. — Unknown
