Oh the antagonist isn't the new dragon. The love triangle would be a nice twist though.
I'm going to make a new antagonist, change the plot, and allow new characters!:)
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
Not much of a plot, but it made it more interesting, in my opinion.
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
I'm kind of hesitant about the animal army thing... in reality, most animals wouldn't obey a shifter immediately. Plus people like Hunter and Laiel are sunk, unless this takes place in Africa. I mean, the spider thing is okay, but as for the others, I think it would depend on the animal...
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Hey Ranger, I was thinking about the love triangle and think Laiel and Rayah would be a good couple, she left the evil team for a few days and I think it would be really cute if a person from the evil team fell in love with a person from good. But It's your choice.
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Laiel is in love with Adrian from the evil team at the moment. It could be aother love triangle I guess.
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Go back a couple pages, and see where you last posted. Then read from there.
"The one thing I regret about reading is not being able to live the lifes and adventures of the characters. Maybe that's why I want to write; to create a story that somebody else would want to live."- Me
Cora's creator: Don't break Diablo's heart. He wants someone to love him and get passed his jewel-hoarding habit. Cora can't really hold it against Diablo that he's a jewel-hoarder. He likes jewels, but he loves Cora. Can't she see that?
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