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Posted! Please feel free to comment if there was anything you guys didn't like. I'm also sorry if it seems rushed because I just really wanted to get back into the swing of things. Hopefully, this is a new jumpstart!
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game




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I think the best way to get things going is to open posting upnto everyone again, so we're not just waiting on two people for a long while, and we can move foreward if we hit any snags without much trouble. What do you guys think?




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Alrighty. I'll check in with Chaser about his post, and if needed I'll write up a short post. @Noobwriter88 how do you feel about posting after one of us?




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I'm good and writing a post introducing the first villains. Hope to have it soon.
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.




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Alright great! Then I'll post after Noob.




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Woot here we go!
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And here I was worried we wouldn't get the ball rolling again. Just goes to show what a great cast we have!




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I posted for Yohan; I tried to portray people correctly. But I also introduced two new characters, Onyx's lackeys!

Hannah can create fields of intense gravity through contact. Her secondary Grim ability also allows her to negate it and create zero gravity zones.

Vittorio can fire his tears as frozen bullets of mayhem. His secondary Grim ability is Gigantic Weeping, a sound that reminds people of their sorrows until they freeze from the inside out.

Their second abilities don't have to be unlocked or used at the moment, but those are the ideas I have to make an exciting battle. Have fun!
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Awesome post, @Chaser!

Jack can't actually talk to Betsy, although I could see her pretending to once in a while.

@Noobwriter88, looks like you're up!




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I'm going to be away for the next five days at camp. If noob posts while I'm away, feel free to skip over me and I'll post next




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have fun :)
I was eleven years old
and I'd lost my mother,
and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

mA




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How’s it going @Noobwriter88 ??? I’m really excited to see your first post!
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Hey guys! Back from herding campers and glad to see you!

Noob hit a snag, and won't be able to start writing until Monday, so I'll be taking his posting slot and hopefully he'll be able to post after.



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