Well, Cassie is waiting with her, so they could have a bit of interaction, and there could also be a moment of realization in her post where she figures out that her dad isn't coming home.
So sorry almost done! Swim team has made me a mess!
Why do we capital-N Nerds love Mars so much? Because it's beautiful, it's tough, it's buried in our mythic, childhood memories. It's covered with human triumphs but also with sad stories of failure.
Posted! I'm still trying to find his voice. I'm playing with a sort of "future Zack recalling what happened in his past" sort of style, but I'm not sure if it'll stick. Anyway, let me know if I should change anything!
Hear me out, there's so much more to life than what you're feeling now. Someday you'll look back on all these days, and all this pain is gonna be invisible. - Hunter Hayes
Yeah. I hope I can get it up soon. I'm a little busy, and I had to rewrite it with new information after other people's posts went up, but most likely within 4 or so days.
First, I think the way you portray Phoebe is pretty interesting. From the way she narrates and interacts with the others, it seems like she's a lot smarter than everyone thinks, including herself. It makes me interested in what kind of character she'll turn out to be.
also, I think that Abel wouldn't agree so readily to splitting up. He'd worry that it might make them more vulnerable. He'd probably be worried about a group run in into trouble and not having any other Fused around to help them.
I'm really interested in seeing where Phoebe's character goes. For someone who thinks she's not very smart, she seems very insightful. Great job!
Just a question. What would you think would convince Abel to agree to it, if anything? Or should I just edit the post to end with a disagreement, instead?
