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herro?????
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)




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mina!! doko desuka??
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)




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Posted my third Chapter! yay! Heres the link!

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Read it. It's good. You use 'your' a lot when you're supposed to use 'you're', but it's fine beyond that.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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oh. lol. Thanks.
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I am soo bored.... brb.
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Pix, I have an idea. Since Jace isn't there at the moment and I've taken the role as Jason only until he comes back, I think that he should either not reply or reply in broken words.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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What do you mean, 'Broken words?'
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Like, " 'm ine, aya " instead of saying "I'm fine, Rayah."
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Oh. Yea. Okay. Got it.
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It'll add suspense and contradict what he's saying.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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So why would he be responding in broken words?
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Because he's not fine. He's trying to do something (defending himself maybe or running) while trying to reassure her.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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twenty one pilots




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Yea Rocky you got to be seeing the action between Angelus and Nabaat, it's really good.
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Ooohhh....yeah. I get that. Lol. 'kay. Go ahead.
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"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery