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zohali93
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:46 pm
zohali93 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:46 pm
herro?????
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)




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zohali93
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:50 pm
zohali93 says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 8:50 pm
mina!! doko desuka??
Do the people think that they will be left to say, "We believe" and they will not be tried? (29:2)




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PixieStix
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:03 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:03 pm
Posted my third Chapter! yay! Heres the link!

work.php?id=94530
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TheClosetKidnapper
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:24 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:24 pm
Read it. It's good. You use 'your' a lot when you're supposed to use 'you're', but it's fine beyond that.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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PixieStix
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:26 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:26 pm
oh. lol. Thanks.
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PixieStix
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:33 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:33 pm
I am soo bored.... brb.
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TheClosetKidnapper
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:45 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:45 pm
Pix, I have an idea. Since Jace isn't there at the moment and I've taken the role as Jason only until he comes back, I think that he should either not reply or reply in broken words.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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PixieStix
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:47 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:47 pm
What do you mean, 'Broken words?'
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TheClosetKidnapper
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:50 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:50 pm
Like, " 'm ine, aya " instead of saying "I'm fine, Rayah."
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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PixieStix
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:55 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:55 pm
Oh. Yea. Okay. Got it.
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TheClosetKidnapper
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:57 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:57 pm
It'll add suspense and contradict what he's saying.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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twenty one pilots




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PixieStix
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:59 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:59 pm
So why would he be responding in broken words?
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TheClosetKidnapper
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:00 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:00 pm
Because he's not fine. He's trying to do something (defending himself maybe or running) while trying to reassure her.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots




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KingLucifer
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:03 pm
KingLucifer says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:03 pm
Yea Rocky you got to be seeing the action between Angelus and Nabaat, it's really good.
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PixieStix
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:04 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:04 pm
Ooohhh....yeah. I get that. Lol. 'kay. Go ahead.
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