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haha, nice stories guys ^u^

Hmm... A sad story compared to a happy story... The contrast is quite interesting between you two

I see that too. ^u^

Anyway, awesome job, you two!
You'll be surprised but Drak, I've done stories like your's before.

*nods* ^u^

So, from the simple sentance; 'The moonlight poured into the room, illuminating my crouching figure.' We get a happy story of reunion, a sad story of running away, and a zombie story ^u^

Just shows you how diffrent we all think, no? ^u^ (I have ta say, i wasn't expecting the zombie one Drak ^^)

Yes, mildly surprised. But they are highly fun to write

I once wrote one of me being burned alive in a furnace... Awesomeness <3


Ah, I just wrote what came to mind

Well, that's diffrent ^^ (the burning thing ^^'')

and, ditto ^u^

I was listening to this one song while writing the story.
No wonder my story was so sad...

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lXqYw_II6Pc

Check it out if you can.^u^ It's a nice song.

I was watching my Dad and brother play Halo and curse'in at each other for letting each other die in game ^u^

I'll try to check it out sometime ^u^ (the song ^u^'')

^u^

So, that explains why I ended up with something sad, you ended up with something happy/mischievous, and Drak with a horror/thriller.

So, writing styles, anyone?

*nods* ^u^

What do you think my writing style felt like then?

It was really good ^u^ but you have the same quirk in your writing that I have ^^ to many commas ^^'' I have to watch myself and make sure I'm not combining, like, 3 sentances in one ^u^
It's an easy mistake that isn't serious and really doesn't affect the writing to much ^u^

Hehe...^^"
Thank you.
I know, I have to watch out for it. I was kind of hurrying that story down so I didn't really get to pay attention to the punctuation. Typical, airhead me. ^^"

Now yours. I think me and you have the same kind of writing style. You know, that urban feel. I didn't see much commas or anything in yours, so I can fully say that you're growing out of your "quirky" phase. Hehe!

So, moods? Atmospheres?

Or do you want to comment on Drak's writing style first?

Sorry ^^ got to go, see you tomorow! ^u^

G'bye. *waves*