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Could you give me an example? ^^"

Also, what type of subject?
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Like, You take a simple sentance; 'I stood there, to shocked to move.'

And you make a paragraph out of it ^u^ You can make from just a paragraph to whole pages of a story ^^ Example;

'I knocked on the door to the science class room.
"Hey! David! I'm coming in!" I said. I couldn't wait to start our science project! We were getting an A for sure.
I opened the door. Inside I found David smacking lips with the class slut, Marissa. I stood there, to shocked to move. After a few moments more of watching the love fest, David finally noticed me at the door. He released Marissa immedietly.
"Jenny, it's not what it looks like. She forced herself on me!" He looked calm. How can he look calm? After stabbing me in the back, how can he just stand there and lie to my face?
I turned and ran down the hall. He didn't bother to follow.'

See? ^^ One sentance and You can make a whole story out of it ^u^
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Oh, I do that sometimes too. ^u^

Okay, then. Let's start.

(Btw, that story was completely unexpected... :D )
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Yah ^u^ wait. . .weusing the same sentance or do we pick another? ^u^''
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Let's pick another.
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I saw a pig fly....sounds cool
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Nah, lets go with somehthing like. . . .
'The moonlight poured into the room, illuminating my crouching figure.'
Or something like that ^u^
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Cool! ^^
So, who's starting?
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We all write, and post it at 10:05. Sound good? ^u^
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Em... It's 2:52 AM now :/
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. . . *realizes mistake* Ok, we post in 15min from right now! ^u^ Go! ^u^
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WHOA! This fast 0..0

*ANON!*
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I pushed away my blanket gently, and managed to throw my legs over the edge of the bed. I had to do this quick.
My backpack was already filled with necessities, and my wallet was full with the bulging amount of cash in it, that I had saved up for months.
Now, I had just one more thing to get.
I stooped in front of my dresser and opened it. And just then, the wind blew, and the curtains flew, and the moonlight poured into the room, illuminating my crouching figure.
I took the compact box, barely visible in the shadows of the inside of the dresser, and clutched it to my chest.
I didn't want to cry. Couldn't cry. That was something I had promised myself.
But still, a single tear, as lonely as me, slid down my cheek and splashed on the ground.

(Tried to stay as outliney as possible. :D )
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ZOMBIE:

The moonlight poured into the room, illuminating my crouching figure. Beneath me lay the decomposing remains of Elizabeth Moore, her eyes, or what was left of them, staring in two different directions. Within the ravine she occupied, sickish insects could be seem moving, some passing through the hole which marked the woman’s head, others worming their own tunnels. The surrounding ground was filled with others interested, approaching with a deliberate slowness.

Unconcerned, I continued stuffing parts of her flesh into my mouth with a certain diligence, tasting the sweetness of the meat. Alas, some of it fell out from the hole located in my oesophagus, back onto the humus-covered soil, but I have soon discovered that by covering the opening with one hand when swallowing the inconvenience could be eliminated.

Distant howls could be heard. Wolves, I would have assumed, have I not known better. At times it happened that people reverted back to their animalistic natures due to some powerful emotions, such as fear, perhaps, or intense pain, which I thought more likely. The howls were never-ending, and I smiled, knowing that fresh food would soon be available.

That was a mistake. My jaw fell off. I was not used to smiling.

^u^


Oooohhhh... THE ROOM! Oopsie. Sorry :/ Did not see that one.
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Sorry ^^ Little late ^u^

~I opened the door to the room so quietly not even the schoolmaster would hear it. Surveying the room I shut the door with the same grace. The marble felt cold and unused beneath my bare feet as I tiptoed around the room. I found a spot behind the bed post that you couldn’t see from the door way. Perfect
The moonlight poured into the room, illuminating my crouching figure. Tonight was the night. I had waited weeks for this day, and I would not miss my chance. Payback time. The sound of heavy boots reverberated in the hall outside. My body stiffened.
The door creaked open again, a lot louder than I when I opened it. A familiar smell of horses and leather poured into the quiet room. The steps came closer and closer.
“Boo!” I jumped out, tackling the man to the ground.
“What the- Enya? Is that you?” My older brother looked at me in shock.
I laughed. “Of course it’s me you ninny!” It had been a while since we had seen each other, so of course he wouldn’t recognize me at first. I could barely recognize him! He’d gotten taller, more muscular, and had a lot more hair.
He looked me over “It looks like you went and grown up without me, little sis.” We both laughed, enjoying each other’s company for the first time in five years.~
I am a Leaf on the Wind,
Watch me Soar
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Kyrie Eleison down the road that I must travel,
Kyrie Eleison through darkness of the night



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