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Tue Mar 16, 2010 4:15 am
MiaParamore says...



Can you review these two for me?
A Criminal's Heart

Seems like Eternity
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:14 am
LittlePetRock says...



post675020.html#p675020 It's a fantasy... Pwease? :)
Star light; star bright,
It is time to take flight.
Off I go through the dark of night.
All my hopes and dreams in sight.





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Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:06 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



AspiringAuthor: No, that counts as Twilight Fanfic. :P Sorry.

Shubi: I wasn't going to review that first one, because you had plenty of great reviews already! :D And just as I was reading the second one, Kitty did that awesome review to add to Nephthys'. Sorry, friend! I'll make it up to you. :D

Rock: I'm doing yours now!
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 2:36 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Done!
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:35 pm
Sins says...



Hey there Mr.Knightly! :)

Can you please review the first chapter of my story?
Just don't expect anything amazing! :lol:

topic60411.html

Thanks.

xoxo Skins :smt002
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Sat Mar 20, 2010 2:49 pm
Valentine says...



Please review chapter 5 of Shades of Violet.

Here it is: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post676473.html#p676473

Thanks you so much Knightley.
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Sun Mar 21, 2010 10:58 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Done, Valentine! :D
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Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:35 pm
thewritingdoc says...



This is the beginning of my story, Chapter 1: Embrace the End.
I don't want to give too much away.. but I'll tell you that it takes place around the years 2050-2055.

viewtopic.php?t=60476

If you could review it, I'd be so grateful.
Thanks!

~tennis
    I'd rather write about this world than live in it
    and I'd rather play music all day
    and read and wander around bookstores
    and watch humans
    but not be one of them.





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Sat Mar 27, 2010 10:51 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Finished, Tennis! I hope it's okay. :D
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Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:03 am
Sura says...



Consider reviewing this?

It's a very short poem. :3
I'm back!

"Breaking fixed idea!
Throw away the prejudice
that fish live in fish bowls only!"





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Sun Mar 28, 2010 1:19 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Okay, Sura! *reviewed*
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:16 am
BondGirl007 says...



Timmy! One of mah favorite boys! Woah you have a lot of requests xD

So here's another one ;).

post680167.html#p680167

Loveyouthanksbye.
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Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:54 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Done, Hope! Thanks for requesting one. :P
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:45 am
Maddy says...



Hey there Knight,
Will you be able to spare a few moments and review this?
topic60873.html
It's going to be moved into fan-fiction, I think. Anyway, it's themed on goosebumps. :)
Thanks!
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you!
-"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."

This awesome post bought to you by me. :)





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Wed Mar 31, 2010 11:53 pm
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All set, Maddy!
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Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, awesomely simple, that's creativity.
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