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Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:51 pm
Sins says...



Heya :)

Could you review my fantasy fiction? You reviewed he first chapter of it, I think. :wink: Your review was helpful, so I thought I'd come back for another one please!

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Thanks in advance,
xoxo Skins
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Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:54 am
Mr.Knightley says...



Finito! Keep 'em coming, guys! I'm wide open here.
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:50 pm
Rydia says...



Hey, I'm not sure if you do art reviews? If not feel free to ignore but I'd appreciate it if you could give Sarah a review:

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Thank you. If you'd like a review in return, feel free to send me a pm.

Heather xx
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:24 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Reviewed! That's the first time I've ever had someone ask for another person's work to be critiqued. ;)
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 11:51 pm
Sins says...



Hey Knightley :)

I've written some more of my Fantasy story, if you're interested. It's the second part of chapter two. It's pretty short though, by the way :wink:

Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)
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Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:51 am
Firearris says...



Hey Knightly. Willing to do an essay, by any chance?

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[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"
Take that, Lumi.





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Fri Apr 09, 2010 1:36 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Completay!
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:31 am
Sins says...



Hey Knightley 8)

May I please have a review on my fourth chapter of Can You See Me?
To me, this chapter's a bit of an epic fail... so yeah! I need help!

Thanks,
xoxo Skins

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Sat Apr 17, 2010 2:45 am
RayquazaKid says...



Hi, could you review this for me?

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Mon Apr 19, 2010 7:20 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Done...took me a while. Dx
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Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:57 pm
Sins says...



I'm aware that I'm beginning to sound stalkerish here, but that's what makes me cool :)

Anyway, fancy doing me another review on my novel/story?

Can You See Me? Chapter 5

Thanks in advance!

xoxo Skins
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Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:06 am
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Maddy says...



Hey Knightley,
I'm hoping you remember awhile ago I got you to review some chapters about a Goosebump novel? Well, now the second part is released. :) Some critique, please?
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Thanks in advance.
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)





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Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:50 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Done! I need more! Hayulp!
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:05 am
WhiteTiger93 says...



Hey Knightley! :)
I'd love for you to reveiw this and I'd be so grateful!

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Title: Golden Souls (part 1)
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Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:43 pm
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Mr.Knightley says...



Okay, Tiger! *reviewed*

Bring it on, peeps! I can handle it.
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