Hey amy, it's me again I really appreciated your review. I was quite nervous to write my next chapter because I realised I hadn't really put some drama in like you and a lot of my other reviewers mentioned, and I kinda felt quite pressurised to put some drama in. Anyway, It's been difficult but I've finally put up chapter 9, so I hope you can take a look at it when you can and give me your opinion on whether it's enough, if it's not I may stop writing as it's difficult to keep readers interested in a long story. Anyway, thanks so much x
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post651464.html (chapter 9
*coco
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