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...except to do homework occasionally and chill to music. I will gladly review anything given to me. I'm not much of a grammar corrector; rather, I'll review what I see in the depth of the story, the characterization, and things of that nature. If you're interested, feel free to drop me a pm or something.

First customer here. Could you look at my action/adventure, Turning The Knives.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Thanks man.

Sure thing. I'll get on it and pm you when I'm finished.

Ello! If you feel like it, I've got something that might relieve your boredom for a day or two

It's a novel; urban action/adventure fantasy, if that's your thing.

Check my signature for the link!

I'll take a look at it. I'll pm you with my thoughts when I finish. Please have patience, as that it could take a while. I can't say for sure how long it'll be.

Could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to send it off and I'd appreciate it if you could offer any feedback. Please help.

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Would you mind reviewing my story? It's fantasy, called the Horse from Transview, the first chapter of what might become a book.
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