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Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:58 am
Terpsichore says...



I'm pretty cheap, I know. But hand me a smiley and I'll do a review. Yaaay!

I do pretty much anything, except Historical Fiction - I can't help you there, unfortunately.

:!: Warning! :!:
My poetry reviews aren't very good... but I can still give my opinion and maybe a few suggestions :)

Let the reviewing begin!
The pen is indeed mightier than the sword. I will maim you with a weapon, but destroy you with a word. -- A.C.G





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Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:57 am
Antigone Cadmus says...



This thread is so empty!

Please and thank you? :D

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--Antigone
Odi et amo. quare id faciam, fortasse requiris?
nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
-Catullus, Carmen 85





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Mon Jul 13, 2009 5:57 pm
ZannaShepherd says...



Hi,
I really need reviews for my short story Fantasist. It's an entry for 'which path to take' contest. Anything is helpful!

Fantasy Fiction
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topic50713.html

~Zanna





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Mon Jul 13, 2009 6:32 pm
TaylaChase says...



Will you review this please?

Non-fiction
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Thanks! :D

~Tayla
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
~Albert Einstein

I'm not afraid of death, I just don't want to be there when it happens.
~Anonymous

I am the author of my life. Unfortunately I'm writing in pen and I can't erase my mistakes. . .
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Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:30 pm
Terpsichore says...



Heya, I'm feeling horrible that I haven't done the last 2 reviews - will get on it as soon as I can. Since school has started I've barely been on YWS, so I'm going to close this thread for now.
You can still ask me to do reviews, but I may take a LONGGG time. ;)

Thanks guys!
The pen is indeed mightier than the sword. I will maim you with a weapon, but destroy you with a word. -- A.C.G





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Mon Aug 24, 2009 4:45 pm
ZannaShepherd says...



Hi, :D
I have a story that I really want feedback on. It's the first part of a three part short story. Also a possible entry for the 'Once Upon a Time' contest. (It started as that but now it's way too long, that's why I'm splitting it up.)

Once Upon a Time
PG
Fantasy Fiction

topic51479.html

Thanks!
~Zanna :elephant:
In order to write about life, first you must live it!

Ernest Hemingway

Hmm, must be why I only write fantasy, that's the only life I've ever lived.
~Zanna





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Mon Aug 24, 2009 6:01 pm
tobyrocks17 says...



I've got two; romantic/sci-fi and an..other one.

[url]http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic52239.html[url]

[url] topic52240.html [url]

^^ I may have failed miserably at the urls. (and at spelling.) :elephant:





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Tue Sep 15, 2009 9:00 pm
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Reida says...



Could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm going to be sending it out within the next week and hope to make it pitch perfect. I'd so appreciate it if you could.
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Mon Jun 12, 2023 11:45 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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