Hi! I'm looking for a review on this, it's the third chapter in a supernatural novel I'm working on called "The Love Note." I'm not really looking for any more input on the earlier chapters, but you may want to skim through them if you want to understand what's going on. Otherwise I won't mind if you just give me an overall nitpick of this chapter. Please feel free to be as harsh as you are able.
Could you please do a review on my story? I want lots of different people to review it, so I can have lots of opinions.
It's called "Mission Zero"
And it's under action/adventure fiction.
Let me know if you like it.
Thanks. ^_^
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