Young Writers Society

I'm Mia! *Gives the person who's reading this a gianormous hug*

What I can't review:
Poetry. Fullstop.

What I can review:
Fantasy fiction (I love this)
Other fiction
And the other fictions. Haven't reviewed adventure fiction but will try my best at it.

Please don't give me extremely long things to review. Please. xD
I'll get it done, but it'll take long and I won't enjoy it as much.


The sort of reviews I give:
My reviews are normally lengthy and divided into:
1/ Grammatical mistakes and nitpicks
2/ Characters
3/ Descriptions
4/ Plot
5/Overall

If you just need an overall review (where I just give my thoughts about the piece etc) or a line by line one, tell me.

As payment, all I ask for is just a guestbook signing saying whether or not you thought the review was helpful etc.

Finished reviews:
Forever Threnody
Lord Anzius

Thanks for visiting this thread!

xx Mia xx

Hi! This is just a fantasy prologue that I need a bit more input on before I can continue. Can you please review it?

topic44955.html

Thank you so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

Forever Threnody -> Done

Anyone else want reviews? ^_^

Terrafertilis
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post549635.html#549635

Lord Anzius -> Done.

Mimi!

Would you mind checking my short story out?
It's Romantic Fiction.

River flows in you

Thanks!
*Kat*

You did a good job with the first request so I decided to give you this:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47202.html

I didn't realise anyone else had asked for reviews.. I'm so sorry lord Anzius and *writewatiwant*!
I'll give you reviews on other things if you just post them here I promise
xx

Hello! I really want chapter two of my novel "As the World Crumbles" reviewed but I'll also give the link to chapter one so that chapter two makes sense .

topic49104.html chapter one

topic49243.html chapter two

Do you review lyrics?

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