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Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:44 pm
Threnody says...



Hello! I would really appreciate it you could take a look at this poem and review to your most harshest extreme. Thank you so so so much!

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Thanks again!

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Forever Threnody
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:40 pm
Storm_Bringer says...



Done with yours. Nice poem. :wink:

Anyone else?

*walks away muttering something about all the purples around my lonely little thread...*
"You know when you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams."
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 12:34 am
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Samantha Eliza says...



An Inch from Perfect - I've put it in Other Fiction, but I suppose it could qualify as romance. I'd appreciate anything that you have to say on it; I just want to know how to make it better. Thanks so much in advance!
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Mon Apr 20, 2009 7:37 pm
Storm_Bringer says...



Done with yours!!!

More, please? :D
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Mon May 04, 2009 1:28 am
Storm_Bringer says...



Anyone else???
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Fri May 08, 2009 7:23 pm
Chloe(: says...



Can you take a look at this?
Formerly known as Vivacious.

Full of Cliches:a challenge to see who can write a piece with the most cliches.





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Sat May 09, 2009 5:39 am
Storm_Bringer says...



Done, Vivacious!

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One post in my thread=Three cookies

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Sun May 17, 2009 7:29 pm
Storm_Bringer says...



Come on, you know you want one~
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Fri May 22, 2009 11:06 pm
Rascalover says...



Can you please review my romantic fiction piece titled Let Me Love You

topic48315.html

please and thank you

-Tiffany :)
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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Sun May 24, 2009 9:46 pm
WritersBlock247 says...



hi, I'm looking for a pretty brutal review for this piece cuz I like it alot


Unsolved Mystery
fantasy
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Sun May 24, 2009 11:05 pm
Storm_Bringer says...



Done with yours Writers Block!

Getting to the others!

Sorry I'm so slow lately, school and the end of the year homework has been a hassle! Again, Sorry!
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Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:21 am
imapoemperson says...



Title:Struck Sightless-Chapter one
Genre:other Fiction
Link:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic52513.html

There is a prologue before the story, but please don't review the prologue...you can read it though. ^^
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Sun Sep 06, 2009 9:10 pm
Pretty Crazy says...



Alright you asked for it!
I'd appreciate it if you'd review this:
Title: Mission Zero part 4
Genre: Action/adventure fiction
topic52595.html
There is parts 1-3 so yeah, it might help to read those.
Thanks :smt001
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Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:35 pm
Storm_Bringer says...



Done & Done!

Keep them coming 'cause I'm back!

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Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:46 pm
Young gun says...



I would really appreciate if you could review this.It dint do as well as its first version.

topic53783.html

title:Strange love III-The butterfly effct

Thanks.
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