I feel obligated to contribute to your post-Instructordom frenzy, Jon. And even though this story above already has some awesome critiques from some awesome people, I've never has a Wise Review. So I'm curious.
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"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
Lydia and Icaruss: I will have to get to those this weekend. I know I'll spend an hour or more on each and I don't have the time right now. I will definitely get to them this weekend though.
Would you be so kind as to go over this for me (The Gate, Fantasy fiction)? Mostly overall comments. The grammar, or lack there of, I know about. I meant it to be that way.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo
Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
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