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Sat Mar 28, 2009 3:20 am
Jon says...



Wise Reviewing:

-Cost nothing.
-Can be anything.
-If you like it, come back for more!
- Guaranteed review in two days or your money back?


Anyway, I've just became an Instructor and I want to do a frenzy.

I'll be like a shark. :D
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:32 pm
xDudettex says...



Hey there =]

Congrats on becoming an instructor!

I'd really appreciate it if you could review my prologue for me. The story is yet to have a title though.

It's in Other Fiction,

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Thank you!

xDudettex
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 5:58 pm
Sinnful says...



Hey there, congratulations on becoming an instructor. c:

Could you perhaps review my story, Listless, for me? Thank-you, if you can. x)





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Sat Mar 28, 2009 9:09 pm
Jon says...



Done!
They were both good! :D
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 9:25 pm
Rosendorn says...



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My turn!
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 9:46 pm
Evi says...



Steps Ahead of Thunder

I feel obligated to contribute to your post-Instructordom frenzy, Jon. :P And even though this story above already has some awesome critiques from some awesome people, I've never has a Wise Review. So I'm curious.

;)
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 9:56 pm
Jon says...



Done, Rosey!
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 10:43 pm
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Done Evi!
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Tue Mar 31, 2009 12:40 am
LydiaB says...



Wow! You get your money back AND it's free?! Count me in!!! (;))

Yes, I know this is fantasy and it's predictable... But I'm working on it! Will you review this for me?
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Thank you so much!
-Lydia <3
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Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:47 am
Icaruss says...



Hey! Can you please do me? I got no critiques on my latest thing.

It's called "Last Date."
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but none of them are mine





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Tue Mar 31, 2009 11:08 pm
peanutgallery007 says...



Hey! I'm peanutgallery007, obviously. Can you review my new poem, New Generation? It is in Other Poetry section. That would be wonderful! ;)

Thank you :D !
Have a peanut =)

Try your hand at my poetry contest!

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Thu Apr 02, 2009 9:57 pm
Jon says...



Peanut, Done.


Lydia and Icaruss: I will have to get to those this weekend. I know I'll spend an hour or more on each and I don't have the time right now. I will definitely get to them this weekend though. :D
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:33 am
imapoemperson says...



Lyric poetry topic46134.html thanks! :D
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 11:18 pm
Rosendorn says...



Would you be so kind as to go over this for me (The Gate, Fantasy fiction)? Mostly overall comments. The grammar, or lack there of, I know about. I meant it to be that way.
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:48 pm
wiccaryan says...



I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

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Chapter 3 and 4

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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