Young Writers Society

I decided it was about time I created a new thread, seeing as the old one is rather long.

I review anything, anything at all.

I have recently being reviewing more poetry than fiction, but I do enjoy reviewing fiction too.

An example of a poetry review on Evi's skies descending
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I enjoy philosophy and so will probably make my own philosophical assumptions of your meaning and ideas within your piece.

Anyway, I'm off to do some reviews,


Request, now,

~Me

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First chapter. Please be as harsh as possible about everything, but mainly about the characters. Thanks!

If you could reviewThe Bedside Reminder it would be great. I would love to get a philisophical view on it. Thanks.

Workin' on both of them presently.
Any more, as Fridays tend to be my night of staying up until four in the morning writing and reviewing pieces on YWS. xD

I would love it if you read my new short story, The Truth of the Matter. It's my first attempt at a story like this and I would love some pointers.

www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45077.html


Thanks, it's a poem.

Jon, I've done the first part of your review, and I shall do you a quick run over the rest later.

Working on everyone else's.

Edit: Dr. Atl's is done.

please review!

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Wooster ~ I've done yours, it's not particularly harsh, more very nit-picky, not grammar-wise though, as the grammar was perfect.

imapoemperson ~ I'm workin' on yours.

Any more ?

imapoemperson ~ yours is done.

Hello,

I was wondering if you would kindly review this piece:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic45220.html

Thanks so much!

Um....I don't want to seem, well, crabby but, did you ever get around to examining my piece. If you haven't its ok. If there are any issues, just PM me.

Lilymoore - Sorry, I didn't even notice yours! I shall review it though. Expect it for tomorrow as I'm going to a concert tonight with my friends and won't be back until about midnight.

yrclever - Same as Lilymoore ^-^

~Me

Awww, its no biggy. I was just very confuddled. And its not even that I'm looking for a detailed review, its that I would love to get a detailed opinion of it...if thats ok of course.


But thank you!

All finished.