Young Writers Society

Yep. I'd love to do some critiquing. (I do take chocolate, lattes and sugar cubes please.)

Some things I specialize in therefore enhancing the quality of the review:
• Short stories of any genre.
• Poems of any kind.
• Scripts
• Art/Photography

Things I am a bit shaky about and therefore can't review very well:
• Anything rated "R." (But actually, just explain why it's rated like that and I'll figure out whether or not I'll review it.)
• Romance
• Fan-fic (depends if I understand the base plot.)

So yes. That's it. I don't charge anything but tips are always welcome.

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

Hi, Threnody. Nice to meet you! I'm Pop.

topic42343.html
^^Short and sweet poem for ya.


*anti-pop

Hello, Forever! Would you mind reviewing one of my short stories for me? =]

Title: The Elves are Coming
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post492214.html
Word count: Around 615

antipop~completed
RGallegher~completed

Thanks for posting guys!

Hey, could you please review these for me. *shows a twenty* I'll pay you for good work. *wink, wink*

Both are other poetry.
Is life a breeze?
topic41735.html
Moonlit Beach
topic42432.html

DaughteroftheMoon~done

post494087.html#494087
^^Chapter one of a new project for me.


*anti-pop

topic42614.html

Could you critique this, please? This is really, really experimental and I'm not sure if it'll work.

Hey, Could you please please please please review this for me?

Five Heart Shaped Necklaces Chapter 1
topic40812.html
and
Chapter 2
topic40828.html

Thank you so much!

Hello, Review please!

Prologue
Chapter 1 part 1
Chapter 1 part 2

Rip 'em to shreds and post A.S.A.P

Thank you so much, I desperately need to know if anyone likes it!!!

Well, hello there!
I have two poems - please review?

You used to play ~ topic42956.html
Green ~ topic43024.html

It's all right guys... I won't bite.

post530063.html#530063 please review!

^_^ Hi, Forever Threnody.
If you could take a look at my newest poem and be as harsh as you can, I would adore you forever!
Harshy harsh harsh! It's Lyric Poetry, I suppose, but that's not the same as lyrics. Anyways.

Take a gander?

It's called Seasons of Ice or His Eyes. If you could also maybe pick the title you think is better after reading it, that would be great. I can't decide!

CLICK!

Okay, I'm back again and ready for business.

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody