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Hey all! If you want to receive an in-depth review... just drop your story by! I can promise that I will have it all torn up for you in at least a day or so! Don't be shy, drop in by!


It won't cost any points or anything, I enjoy reading other writer's work

can you rip this part?

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Sure thing. I didn't think I would get a response this fast! I should have it done in a day or so.... I'm a bit overloaded with midterms right now. But, it will be done!

well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know is that "Silent Hill" is a town that people's worst fears take shape.

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If you need to know what is happening Beth is looking for her missing sister. Right now she is currently in Silent Hill, with Sera. Sera is a really nice person who wants to help Beth, however Beth hates Sera.

prologue- Beth has a dream that her sister disappears, and it comes true

ch1- 4 years later Beth (18 years old) thinks about the past, and how no one really looked for her sister (Alex). Sera makes her appearance. Its highschool graduation day, and Beth leaves her hometown (Ashfield) and heads to Silent hill to find her sister. (Since she got a note in Alex's handwriting saying "Silent Hill").

ch2- Beth's car brakes down, and she has a strange dream. After she wakes up, Beth hitchhikes, and surprisingly Sera appears and offers her a ride. When they are driving Beth falls asleep, and has a nightmare.

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please review it *Begs*

Alright , both of yours will be done. Just as soon as midterms are over...sorry for the inconvenience, should be done by friday

Luck with the midterms...(what ever they may be... I dunno I really dunno)
but anyways

I'll drop my "The mansion story here, it is about a guy who moves to a mansion, there he meats a gnome (who had eaten the MC's cake) now he is going to buy groceries.


Here it is... The third chapter. What will happen to our beloved Jack this time?

read more below

Name: The mansion chapter 3 (Dust an' Products)
genre:other fiction

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35811.html

Here's mine,
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It's about a young boy who is kidnapped by a serial killer.

Hope you enjoy it =]

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