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If you want an indepth critique visit here please
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40810.html
Ok
I'll review anything

I'm bored, I have a lot of time, I want to review. Got it? Good

My reviews tend to be long, very long. I copy and paste the whole thing, go through it line by line, then have subcategories
plot character development Grammar etc
then I conclude my opinions.
Example ?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post459369.html?highlight=#459369

So if you want one just say
If you have multiple requests that's fine too, but please just give me one at a time....x

I specify in:

Plot
Characterization and especially, especially, especially, especially word choice. Description too

-bye x

Will you review

topic40060.html

please and thank you

Tiff

nevermind

I've done yours rascalover

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post447085.html#447085
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39491.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36932.html

If you could review any of these, I'd appreciate it! Thanks so much!

Kaila, I've reviewed them all

topic31457.html

review, please.

topic40209.html - Chapter 1 Stepping Into Static

topic40419.html - Chapter 2 Stepping Into Static

If you can critique BOTH... now that would be simply AMAZING! But i really want chapter 2 reviewed more!

Thanks

I'll review both Niccy
and now's your chance people, I'm not going out on Christmas eve until night time xD, ya I'm that sad but... So if you want something reviewed ask now

if you don't have anything better to do...

Advanced crit - but do not feel the need to do anything major with it, I'm all good for just general stuff, I think most of the grammar/spelling is all good...

topic40583.html

Firebird
It's got an eagle...he turns into an eagle when he wants, but he does get violent in the next half I kind of have under construction...

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