Young Writers Society

Hey (:
Anyone want me to review anything? Because I kind of like to review things! Please don't be offended if I'm slightly harsh, but if it's good, you'll get praise. A lot of it! Excessive amounts. So if you'd like me to review anything I shall.
If you want to review mine here it is, I know that it's ridden with mistakes but I'm just looking for some reviews on the plot and characters. It's still to be edited, I didn't have much time when I posted it The grammer in it is probably terrible. Excuse me. It's called Adelaide and yeah, there are loads of mistakes and it's not very good at all but I kind of like one of the main characters. Marcel. So if you have time it'd be a great help but if not don't worry
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Don't feel that you have to review mine, I'll review yours either way, if you do post a review on mine or not.
Kirsten x

www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39273.html


This is my chp. ten of ten, I would appreciate it!


Thanks


---Jon---

I'm interested by your story... I will read it, (when I have time)

Please review these:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36987.html This shouldn't be prologue

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html The mansion chapter 1

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35415.html The mansion chapter 2

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34985.html The ripper prologue

Hey Wiseman and Lord Anzius
I've reviewed all the pieces you asked me to, I have to say, they were really good
Thankyou
-Kirsten x

Hi!

Would you review my poem, A cul de sac?

Here it is: topic32933.html

Thanks in advance!

Demeter xxx

I'll get on to it right now Demeter
x

Done it Demeter, it was great
-Kirsten xxx

Could you please review this for me?


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Please and thank you,
-Zehra

Hey Kirsten dahling!

Bunch of reviews for you here. Only to do when you have time; as I feel bad assaulting you with stuff.

topic39577.html < Chapter 1 of a new novel.

topic39569.html < A dramatic poem

topic39573.html < Paper Dolls

Thankyou. You rock.
x

Sarah dearie I have reviewed chapter 1 and a poem called paint factory or something (Sorry that's probably completely wrong!)
I've got to go now but I promise I'll do the others tomorrow
x

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39491.html

I'd love more reviews on this one. Thanks if you get the chance!

KailaMarie, I've done yours x

Done Sarah, they were incredible, as per usual. Keep them coming people
x

More anybody ?

I have something!

Its called Eternal Sunrise

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Thanks

~Angie