Young Writers Society

Greetings, earthlings!

Here's the scoop--if you have something you need help with, I would most definitely love to read it and give you a review.

A few examples:

A Poetry Critique

A Character Critique [fiction]

Another Character Critique (PG-13)

Basic Fiction

...you get the idea. I'm pretty weird, and my critiques reflect this.

What do I critique? I can do both poetry and prose. Genre-wise (fiction), my strengths lie in historical and romance, but if you write something awesome, I will probably like it. I like to look at the piece as a whole--that being said, I don't do line-by-line critiques unless by request. Mostly, though, they will be big-picture things so that you get an idea of how successful your piece was as a functioning work of art.

*rubs belly* I'm hungry!

I have always dreamed of getting a critique from you, ever since I saw your first one. (Seriously. It's pathetic, but still...)

I will be forever grateful.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post346536.html#346536

Want a review in return? I'm trying to get another star, hence the link in my siggy. ;P

Thanks!

~JFW1415

Sammich!

I have a historical piece for you. Maybe you'd like to take a peek?

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Thanks,

-Kylan

Yay! Your crits are awesome, Sam.

(RUNAWAY) Chapter One

It's 'Other Fiction' right now, but it's really a romance story, I guess. Just not so much in the first Chapter... so if you don't want to review it, don't feel obliged. ^^

Thanks!

- Camille xx

Part One
Part Two

I'm obsessed with your crits.

And I'm still waiting for you to tell me what you'd like critiqued!

~JFW1415

Hey


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Please and Thank You!

OverEasy

One more?

Pretty please?

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Please and Thank You!

Oh my gosh! I've never had a Sam critique!

What's it like?

That's from my new musical that I'm working on with Sumi H. Inkblot. We need all of the help I can possibly get.

-Jared

Because you're amazing?

Rainbows and Roses

Just a short, quick thing that I need a lot of help in.

I need to set some time aside to edit! I really need to look at your critiques and rip my stories to shreds. O.o Right now I'm working something that's coming out really easily (though it may not be coming out well, haha,) and I don't want to stop!

Ah, well. I'll get to them eventually, yes?

Thanks so much! You're 'awesome sauce,' to use one of your phrases.

~JFW1415

Hi. I'd love it if you'd crit this. It's 16 pages, but I'll give you 50 pts. to do it.
www.youngwriterssociety.com/post376096.html

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Not hysterical, but if you could, I'd expire with gratitude.

My, Twist definitely has a juicy something to critique, so no rush at all to getting to this. I've seen your reviews, though, and they always make me giggle. I want want now.

No rush at all, of course.

The Dragon, the Dog, and the Dove

~ Jabber ~

SKUA is up...

Don't kill yourself in your frenzy? You're too awesome to lose.

Thanks!

~JFW1415

I know you have a lot on your plate already, but if you could please spare time to review my three-part story "Tangled Up In Blue", I'd be forever grateful.

My darling Sam! *grovels* I realize, your most exalted ladyship, that you have many more requests before mine, many of them more worth your valuable, your precious and priceless and much-sought-after time. But, if one so great as you could be moved to look upon a lowly falcon, and give her aid with a fantasy tale which she is trying to get published, that bird would be forever grateful (and willing to critique whatever you would like in return).

Prologue and First Chapter: topic31678.html

*retreats, bowing all the time*