Young Writers Society

Alright, so I'm not good at the grammer crits. I can normally do those if I have color changers and I haven't figured out the picture things yets.

SO!! I'm offering readers crits, basiclly what they are is where I'll read it and tell you if it is good, what a reader would want and so on. A big thing for me is to be able to picture the story in my head. It takes a lot to be able to do that, but it is possible. SO if you would like me to crit yours then please leave me the url to it here!! I'm better at Romance, but I can do anything. Well except poetry, I'm not really that good at those. Infact I'm no good at them.

I'll bite.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27568.html

If you want me to critique anything of yours, send me a PM.

Prokaryote

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This is a romance that I think you'll like

-Jared

I'd love any crit's I can get on my new novel,

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Thanks heaps.

THis is mostly just for me to know what I have done and haven't.

Choc- yours are done. I did your first cause they were sorter and my brain didn't want to read a lot of text at the moment.

BBB- Yours is done.

Prok- I will get to yours soon, don't worry. If I dont give me a simple nudge.

Perfect! I've been needing a crit on my new story, but haven't gotten very many.

Here it is:

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Here is the first and second chapters to my new Romance story. It's not really what I normally do, so bare with me.

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Please and thank you!

In my portfolio, 'Alphess: part one' and 'NN -- Prologue: Dark water, Pale flame' need your love!

Thanks!

Mandy--- I can't read yours right now it is WAY to long (i have a headache). If I don't get it then remind me.

OverEasy- Yours are done. Good job

Wolf--- I'll have to get to yours later too. Remind me if I don't. They look good, mostly because they are about wolves, I need to learn more about them for the story I am writing so your stories might help.

Here's an Werewolf story that you can crit............................

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thank u..........................

If you have time, I'd love a review on this. It looks long, but it's really just a lot of short paragraphs, so...

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If you want a review, please let me know! I want another star.

~JFW1415

I need you to crit everything in my portfolio.

Hey, if you want me to crit you work bump me. If I haven't done yours and you asked tell me if you still want me to do it.

Hey, I got a piece in Other called Intuition that could use a crit. It's in 5 parts, and it's "finished," so feel free to take a look!

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Thanks! PM me if you need something,
RG

I've got a piece I'd love a review on. A Living Nightmare..it's kind of..well, I don't know what it is, exactly.
It isn't complete yet, but I'm working on it....
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Thanks!