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Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:57 pm
lakegirls says...



Hi,
I'm entering my story in a contest so it needs to be top notch. It is an excerpt from a novel, so things are going a bit slow. If you could do it by January 5th I would be on top of the world. If you can't though, I understand.

topic41186.html

Love,
N
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Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:47 am
CastlesInTheSky says...



lakegirls is done! :D [I did hers first because it had a deadline.]
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:15 am
CastlesInTheSky says...



I'm just working on Blink's. :wink: Twooster's should be done presently as well.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Wed Jan 07, 2009 5:51 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



Eeep, just give me a few more hours, people.
Subsequently, don't hesitate to give me more requests. We're never lacking capacity. :wink:
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:13 pm
Anna09 says...



I recently wrote what is almost my first 'short' story. Since I don't read a lot of short stories, I'm just not sure how good mine is...:)
topic41529.html
Thank you so much!!





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Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:33 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



topic41312.html
400 words
other fiction
8)

Kirsten shall be eternally grateful ;)
and she needs to catch up on those TTV chapters she's missed
*Scampers off to do so*
x
for what are we without words and stories?





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Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:20 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



Getting to them, people! :D
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:37 pm
Demeter says...



Hmm. I see you're very busy. But could you do the 10th Bubbling when you have time? No one hasn't reviewed it yet :(

So here it is, again:

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Thanks, Sarah. You're sweet.

xxx
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Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:54 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



I'll get onto it, sugah. :wink:
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Sat Jan 10, 2009 9:08 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



Done!
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:07 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



Twooster's is done! :D
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:10 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



I'm back on the game, so feel free to hassle me for more.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.





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Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:41 pm
Lord Anzius says...



You've read chapters 1 and two, now it is time for you to read chapter 3.


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post423688.html#423688
To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
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Mon Jan 12, 2009 12:54 am
Anna09 says...



Er, me? *raises hand tentatively*
*points to above post*





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Mon Jan 12, 2009 4:12 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



Lol, Anna. :D I couldn't do your critique since it's one you entered in my contest.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.








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