Young Writers Society

Pip! Hola! Over here! (Waves hand in air frantically)
I would very much appreciate it if you could review this for me:

The Monster Under My Bed
This is Part One of Two.
I may need you to review Part Two once I get it up.

Thanks for the review again Pip sir!

I think this is the last chapter I'll ask you to review to, until I get the general idea sorted out.

Chapter 2
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cheers
Tuna

Thanks ever so much, Pip!
If you ever need me to return the favor, just ask!

Rosey Unicorn- Done! I had to be very picky with your piece though as I really couldn't find that much Its very well written.

Phantom- Done! I thought your story was really sweet Let me know when the next one is up and good luck in the contest!

Crouching Tuna- Done as well! There are quite a few nitpicks sorry, I did find your story funny though looking forward to reading more!

Pipzie! thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it.

I was wondering if you'd mind checking the second chapter? To see if I didn't disappoint you ?

Invisible [2]

Thanks, once more!
*Kat*

A Pippidooda review? Yes, please ^^

If you don't mind, I'd like a review


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Kat- Done again! No dissapointment at all I really enjoyed it! I hope to read more soon

angels-symphony- Both done! Sorry it took me a while, I was really impressed by both of your pieces, they were both brilliantly written!

Pippie, I looove your reviews, so I'm here to request another!

Unclaimed [1]

It has a prologue, that you'll have to read *sorry*

*Kat*

Hello I would be very grateful if you would review the first chapter of my story for me please

A Lost Soul (working title) Chapter 1

Thank you!

Kat- done!! I always love your story lines, I think you have a great one here to so I hope you stick with it sorry it took me a while!

Tally- I loved your story! Sorry I couldn't offer many comments, I was very impressed

Thanks so much for the review, I really liked your suggestions - especially about describing the scent of the house & more of the boy's appearance. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Pippie! You have got to say I'm your biggest requester 'cause I'm here for another one. Would you mind reviewing chapter 2 of Unclaimed? Just click on the link of my previous post and check the related items thing. I don't have the link because I'm on my PSP. Thanks! I just really like to hear your opinion

Done Kat! ^^ Thank you for asking for another one of my reviews I'm really glad you like them and I always enjoy reading your stories! I'm really liking the storyline- hope you write more soon!

Hello!! I've finally got ready the next part of "And there was drumroll."
Please can you review it?

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Done Lord Anzius!! I thought it was a really great piece, I didn't have much to comment on at all

Just a note aswell to everyone to say I'm giving YWS a rest, I haven't properly been on here in quite a while now and I feel I'm not really living up to my instructor duties. I may come back in future but for the time being at least I don't think I'll be doing any more reviews I will miss you guys and I've posted in the deparrture thread for anyone to see!

Bye everyone and thank you for appreciating my reviews!

Pippiedooda xxx