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Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:04 am
Sare Agama says...



have a couple; I won't give you my fan-fics, unless you have read Warriors or Redwall.

The Test A True story/event

Vashoa's Life My first story-ever.

Fake, or Real? For the February CIA contest

Whatever you feel like doing, or think needs doing. :)
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Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:52 pm
Chloe(: says...



Fearless, for peanut19's Fearless contest. :)
Thanks!
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Sun Mar 15, 2009 6:09 pm
asxz says...



Okay, sorry guys. I went away for the weekend. I'll be done in 12 hours hopefully!
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Tue Mar 17, 2009 4:46 pm
Pippiedooda says...



Hi asxz! I was wondering if you could review some of the latest parts of my story? Its gotten quite long but I noticed you reviewed some of the earlier ones so I'm hoping it wouldn't take long to catch up- if its too far ahead then don't worry about it :)

Its mostly these last two that I would like some thoughts on,
topic44864.html - Part 9
topic45283.html -Part 10

Thankyou so much!! :D
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Sun Mar 22, 2009 5:46 am
asxz says...



Done... some more please. I have hockey trials tomorrow, so I mighty be doing them early tuesday/late afternoon tuesday
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Sun Mar 22, 2009 6:42 am
Sura says...



n_n;;
Hey!
Would you mind reviewing THIS?
You can be as harsh as you deem necessary, I have a thick skin (not really.) xD

Thanks. : D
I'm back!

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Fri Mar 27, 2009 7:13 pm
asxz says...



Come on... keep 'em going
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Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:28 pm
xDudettex says...



Hey =]

Since you did such a great job when you reviewed 'Letting Go' for me, I'd really appreciate it if you could review my prologue. The story is yet to have a title though.

It's in Other Fiction,

topic45838.html

Thank you :D

xDudettex
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:16 am
asxz says...



Next please!
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:12 am
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Icaruss says...



"Last Date." Pretty please? Got no reviews. I did it for Kylan's Hemingway contest.
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 6:15 am
asxz says...



Yup - any more? It's school holidays for me, so any reviews are welcome!
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 6:54 pm
Twit says...



post539805.html#539805

An amzing harsh, lemon-juice-in-paper-cut harsh critique, please, especially on the title, first chapter-ness and characters. Thanks! :D
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:52 am
asxz says...



Keep 'em coming...
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:44 pm
wiccaryan says...



I was wondering if you could review the first four chapters of my book?

Chapter 1 & 2

topic46539.html

Chapter 3 and 4

post541780.html#541780

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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Wed Apr 15, 2009 7:52 pm
asxz says...



yup... keep posting!
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