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Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:01 am
Jon says...



Okay, That's absolutely fine! Take your time.


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Sat Jan 24, 2009 9:08 pm
Evi says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42459.html

Hey. Thanks for the review you did on 'Dusting Off Angels'. It was very encouraging. I was wondering if you'd like to take a look at something else I've written; I'm planning on entering it in Clo's Monster Mash contest.

It's other fiction. Called 'Watermelon Rinds' as of now, but I don't really like that title.

Thanks so much!

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Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:19 am
pandapez says...



Hi! I was hoping you could review this for me :3
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Title : Weavers Ch 3
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Emily comes from a family of assassins tgifted with magic.She herself doesn't much like that thought of murder and is determined to somehow spare her four year sister, Katie, from the same fate.





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Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:13 pm
Chloe(: says...



Could you please review this?
It's fantasy romance, and if it's a little confusing, it has to be to go along with the rest of the story.
topic42563.html
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Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:15 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



I'll get to these people :)
I'm not dead, just school :(
xxx
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:16 am
Maki-Chan says...



How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!
check out my deviantart account ^_^
http://maki121.deviantart.com/





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Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:13 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Hi everyone :D
I've been away for ages, but I'm back :)
So I'll get to these today (hopefully)
anyone else?
x
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Sun Mar 01, 2009 1:48 am
Lost_in_dreamland says...



I've done yours Maki Chan
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Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:43 pm
Galerius says...



I would like this poem critiqued: topic43953.html

Thanks in advance.





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Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:44 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Galerius, I've done yours. xD
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Fri Mar 06, 2009 12:31 am
mhmmcolleenx0 says...



Hey! Could you review this for me? It's a prologue to my new story.

post520537.html#520537

If you could help I'd appreciate it!
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Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:48 pm
asxz says...



Hi, could you please review?
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Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:01 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Colleen, I've done yours, it's not particularly good, but...

Any more?
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Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:10 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



When I say it's not particularly good I mean the review, not your piece. xD
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Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:17 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Please don't post anything in this thread, I've decided to abandon it and create a new one. If you'd like a review please post in my new thread
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